A few tips for writing a bondage story.
Nothing specific; please do not take offense at the language.
First figure out what sort of bondage story you want to write: is it about a couple friends having fun together? Innocent woman kidnapped and bondaged? A couple having a good time in the bedroom? This has a big effect on how you should write it.
Remember that the story is about the person tied up: you may write it from the perspective of the person doing the binding, but the focus should be on the person bound, though you should also put some detail into the binding, and what is used to bind, as Knottysilkscarf writes:
'. . .A lot depends on your audience. I do a lot of fetish stories. . . We deal a lot with scarves and pantyhose, for instance. The scarf people want to know, not only that a scarf is used for a gag, but that it is a floral design with these colors. The term 'scarf' is very generic, just like the terms 'bound' and 'gagged'. I don't know how many times I have seen 'she wa